What we did: We had to draw another version of Vincent Van Gogh's starry night we only started with blue black white and green then as we went on we incorporated more colors like yellow and orange. Then Mrs Lee told us to write a poem or a acrostic poem to match the piece of artwork we did .
Here is mine.
Hello Sanele,
ReplyDeleteIt Nathan from room 6 and I really like how you made a acrostic poem about Matariki, really clever. And Of course I like your picture, I suggest to you is to put more big words and make it rhyme too, other than that your poem is amazing
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DeleteTalofa Sanele,
ReplyDeleteIt's Tama from room 6 and I ready like how you have dig and bold colors it you peon and it really sands out for me. it's really good that you can came up with these good strong words its good. i think that the colors that you chose a is a good chose nice job Sanele and hope you tack that talent to St. Thomas.
Thank you Tama for your comment.
DeleteHi Sanele,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained what you did and how you did it. Your a really great painter!. Maybe next time you could use a thinner paintbrush because your Matariki stars look like windows! , But i love your poem and how you layed it out as an acrostic poem .
Sincerely , Nikita .
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DeleteHi Sanele,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used some very good vocabulary in your post. I also like the colour of choice that you choose for your piece of art. Maybe next time you could try and make it all rhyme, But other then that it was amazing.
-Atalina
Hi Sanele,
ReplyDeleteI love this poem and artwork, you have done really well. I like how you have changed the font colour with some letters it really stands out. Something you could do better next time would be to try add some rhyme into it to make it sound more interesting.
Keep up the awesome work.
Siobhan.
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DeleteHi Sanele,
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem and you put a lot of descriptive words in it. I also think that changing the font colour was really clever. Maybe next for a challenge you could make it rhyme.
-Dion
Hi Dion
ReplyDeleteThe reason why I didnt make it rhyme was because I always make it rhyme but this time I changed to not rhyming
BTW thank you for your helpful comment