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Tuesday 18 September 2018

Jacks secret candy store.


Long ago in a small poor village lived a boy named jack he had a poor family and he was one of the poorest but what no one knew was that he found a secret candy store far away from the village he would always go there in times of hungriness his favourite chocolate of all was the melted caramel bar. So one day he was so so hungry he went to the candy store but when he went there he saw that someone had been eating the chocolates. Then he suddenly heard a noise it sounded like he was eating more. After it stopped then it happened again I better check that out he suggested so he did and when he did he saw a little girl she looked really hungry. So then I asked who are you she replied my name is.

The Eyes came to life.


 One dark thundering unusual day there lived a boy. He lived beside a spooky house. And in the house lived an old lady and a old dude. They to me like they were 78 years of age. The old dude had always carry around a fork. It was really weird besides their creepy house. So one bright shining evening the boy heard some screams. It came from the next house , he was confused on what was happening but he wasn't really scared. After the screams had finished so he went out of his house and went to the next door. The door was opened and their were scratch marks. I walked down the isle of painting that were dangling from the walls. Then there it was in the painting was the girl who was missing for a long time she was standing there and her eyes were looking at me and it was like they were following me. After I saw the painting that freaked me out the most their inside the painting stood the old lady and old dude they were telling me something it was like there was something behind me I turned around and it went but something was on the roof standing there was the MONSTER WHO KILLED THEM. DAA DAA DAAAAAAAAAAA